14.| Day-Lynx
REVIEWER : TheMojoPoet
Day-Lynx - michh_44
Cover -10 /10
Title- 9.5 /10
Blurb- 10/10
Characters- 8.5/10
Flow- 9/10
Plot- 18.5/20
Creativity- 10/10
Enjoyment- 17 /20
Total- 92.5 /100
Cover- It is amusing and the colours match the overall story perfectly.
Title- The title is as interesting as the story but just that it might not attract the readers at first.
Blurb- The blurb seemed like several cliffhangers stuffed in together and brief information about the plot which is definitely a must!
Characters- Here the emotions of the characters were described nicely though you could've added details about their features and maybe shift the perspectives in a while.
Flow- The flow was good but sometimes there was a bit more focus on characterisation while other times on dialogues.
Plot- It was a unique plot. Day-lynx itself made a lot of questions pop up in my mind. I was a bit disappointed as at times I used to lose my interest. This varies a lot so you can neglect this point as it is from my personal pov.
Creativity- Absolutely creative!! Nothing to criticize here :)Enjoyment- Now this again depends on my personal pov but conclusively, I liked the story! A tip to consider- you can make banners for each chapter opening as it might attract readers.
Overall rating out of 10- 8.4/10
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