Author's name: artificial_avian

Character's name: Seraphina Fischer

Book of Character's origin: Telky (in the x-men universe)

Genre: Fanfiction

Help: I think that my writing has evolved since I began this story, but lately I feel my character is a little flat and not very relatable(despite the fact she has superpowers). I want Seraphina to be a character that readers can imagine, where they can feel what she's feeling instead of just words on a page