Author: JoeGarden221

Character: Shana Tiger

Story: The Dragon Child

Help: I feel like Shana isn't showing enough depth. She's suppose to be a growing leader who starts out with little patience and a short temper. She's supplied to show over the course of the book how she hardens into a battle worn leader who is no longer the kind girl she started out being. I don't know exactly how to write the transitions so help please.