Author's Name: @Joyce_Balagtas

Character Name: Melanie Frevor

Book of Character's Origin: Better Than Revenge

Genre: Fanfiction, Mystery, Comedy

Help: Melanie is supposed to be withdrawn from spending four years in the wizarding prison, Azkaban. I'm having trouble with making her socially withdrawn from others and more intimidating? She committed a murder she doesn't regret but I'm finding it hard to describe her as socially damaged. I've tried making her weary of people that are too close to her but I don't know how to go about it.