Author's Name: mmtriemstra

Character's Name: Maya Phillips

Book of Character's Origin: The Eye of the Hurricane

Genre: Fanfiction (Harry Potter & Percy Jackson Crossover)

What I need help with: Well, Maya is a daughter of Poseidon, and she also attends Hogwarts. But, I feel like sometimes I write her as if she's invincible and doesn't have any flaws, and I tried writing some flaws in but I don't know if that really worked. Really, any tips or suggestions would be very helpful, and thank you so much