Author: @Phoenixfire06

Character: Gail Withers

Title: undecided

Genre: Percy Jackson Fanfiction

Help: I feel like she is too fake. You are able to tell she isn't real. She freaks out about the littlest things, she has a life that is completely tragic (not yet) and the ending is gonna be pretty happy I guess.

I also feel like she is a little bit too much like me (she is based off of a dream I had) so I'm trying to make her shy, nice, but she has a dark side. Just like everyone else