Danielle went down the stairs to eat. She ate was piece of brocolie and then patted her stomach. She was stuffed.

*I want to see more females with big appetites. It makes young girls feel like they don't have to eat very much, even if they're hungry. Or, it goes like this:

Kayla shoved her face with ice cream and French Fries. She was fifteen, and still only weighed fifty pounds.

*Okay, maybe I exaggerated on that one a little bit, but its true. In a lot of stories a character eats a TON of food, but never gains any weight.....

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