Hey everyone, thanks so much for all and any reads, comments or votes. I have decided to do a short story project, I'm including this one.. the next few chapters contain the rewrite, feel free to share, vote and leave your thoughts.  I've decided to try to rewrite several of these over time, hopefully it's an improvement...

https://youtu.be/gjMnHhyDMrg

  this is a link to one of my youtube videos...