So this is for a part of my book report that consists of a character development part and this is what I wrote for the first paragraph. Fyi the book I'm doing the book report on is Mark Of Athena xD

At the beginning of the novel, the reader is introduced to one of the main protagonists Annabeth. She is the strong, confident, smart leader of the greek demigod camp and the brains of the seven. She is someone who would use her logic and intellect to scan of anything to give her an advantage. She does anything for her plans to succeed, within reason. But like any other demigod, she has a fatal flaw. And her fatal flaw is her pride

Idk really I just want some feedback on it