Judge: hardwiick1

BOOK TITLE: Cherries & Pebbles | A Scorose & Jalice Story

TENSES: 10/10

CHARACTER OPINIONS: 8/10

PLANNED OUT: 10/10

BOOK FITS TITLE & DESCRIPTION: 8/10

BOOK TITLE: 3/5

FOLLOWS: 5/5

OVERALL SCORE: 44/50

REVIEW: I really like your story. I really like the idea of putting both love stories in the mix and showing 3 different love stories although the constant change in POVs does get very confusing and sometimes hard to understand as you are over-explaining the situation.  The characters are very strong and keep the morals portrayed. I can see that you have direction in the story and you know what you want to happen. The Title although does confuse me and the description is very good and descriptive although it doesn't explain much to the story and how it relates, I think if you cleared that up, what the story means and how it relates to the character it would be easier to understand as it is a very creative title. Well done!

BOOK TITLE: Come Back Freddie

TENSES: 10/10

CHARACTER OPINIONS: 8/10

PLANNED OUT: 5/10

BOOK FITS TITLE & DESCRIPTION: 10/10

BOOK TITLE: 3/5

FOLLOWS: 5/5

OVERALL SCORE: 41/50

REVIEW: I somewhat enjoyed your book. I think that it had so much potential and was a very good idea at the start. I think that this book would have been good if it had continued. The book wasn't very planned out in the chapters, but I could see that direction that it was heading. The title does flow with the book, as does the description by them is very vague as well as the chapters. I think if you went back through editing everything and made the chapters longer it would be better. I love how you picked to write about George with the loss of his brother whilst including other characters such as his wife Angelina and the Potter/ Weasley Clan.

BOOK TITLE: In the Space Between

TENSES: 10/10

CHARACTER OPINIONS: 8/10

PLANNED OUT: 8/10

BOOK FITS TITLE & DESCRIPTION: 10/10

BOOK TITLE: 5/5

FOLLOWS: 5/5

OVERALL SCORE: 46/50

REVIEW: I really enjoyed your book and your interpretation of what happened during those 19 years. Although the constant changes and cliffhangers do get a bit confusing and overwhelming, which I would leave them just to soften the blow and calm the storyline down. The title could have some more improvement, but the title fits the story perfectly. The description is very informative and gets the job down although you could go back and tidy it up to make it easier to understand, and to give more information. Great Job!

BOOK TITLE: Winters Rose

TENSES: 10/10

CHARACTER OPINIONS: 8/10

PLANNED OUT: 10/10

BOOK FITS TITLE & DESCRIPTION: 8/10

BOOK TITLE: 5/5

FOLLOWS: 5/5

OVERALL SCORE: 46/50

REVIEW: I really like your story and what you are trying to portray although I do think that the star of the story is very difficult to understand as you are talking about Teddy and the door in the description and the title but you start off the book with Rose and her family. I know that it ties in with the story but I was very confused and it made me disinterested as I didn't know the relevance, even though you have a very good book and idea. The description and the title are immaculate and very thought out. Great work!

BOOK TITLE: When I saw her standing there

TENSES: 10/10

CHARACTER OPINIONS: 8/10

PLANNED OUT: 8/10

BOOK FITS TITLE & DESCRIPTION: 10/0

BOOK TITLE: 5/5

FOLLOWS: 5/5

OVERALL SCORE: 46/50

REVIEW: I have really enjoyed your story. I really like how not many people have written much about Louis Weasley. Your book is amazing and I love how you have added the character list. It is very helpful on how we should imagine the characters. The story is very planned out and I can see the direction in which it is going and like how you set yourself up to answer any questions I have through the book when reading between the eyes for example with Victoire graduating Hogwarts, which gives subtle information on his family. The book title fits the book very well and it is the perfect epitome of the story as well as the description portraying what you are writing in the story, which sets the story up and really intrigues me in those short sentences. Well done!

Judge: Weasley0104

Book Title: The Wandmaker's Granddaughter

Tenses: 9/10

Character opinions: 5/10

Planned out: 8/10

Book fits title and description: 9/10

Book title: 4/5

Follows: 5/5

Total: 40/50

Review: This book was definitely well-written and thought out. I could barely find any grammar or spelling errors and if I could, they were minor. The plot was clear and flowed smoothly making it a fantastic read. I really liked the way the author used descriptions, especially at the start of the story which I think really hooks the reader into the book. The one thing I would like to point out is the characters lacked emotion. As a reader I would want to get to know the character and what they're feeling. It lacked the ability to create a connection between the main character and the reader. Overall, I would say that it's an enjoyable read.

Book Title: The Daily Lives of James S. Potter

Tenses: 9/10

Character opinions: 8/10

Planned out: 6/10

Book fits title and description: 9/10

Book title: 4/5

Follows: 5/5

Total: 41/50

Review: Wonderful series of oneshots. I could rarely find any mistakes when it came to SPAG (spelling punctuation and grammar). I absolutely loved the cover- it really gave an impact and linked really well with the book. I really enjoyed the conversations between the students and after each oneshot it made me want to read more about James Potter's adventures. However I would say that it could have been more organised as I felt as if it lacked a certain flow to it even though the chapters are oneshots. This is why it lacked a good plot that will really hook the reader. Despite this, it was one of the best oneshot series I've ever read.

Book Title: A Little Bit Psycho

Tenses: 8/10

Character opinions: 8/10

Planned out: 9/10

Book fits title and description: 10/10

Book title: 4/5

Follows: 5/5

Total: 44/50

Review:  This book explored the characters in a whole new way which I've never seen done before. The story was truly imaginative and really unique which made me want to carry on reading the story and thoroughly enjoy it. The personality of different characters were expressed really well but I found that the main character's personality could have been more developed- as a reader I wanted to see more of her thoughts and feelings. The plot evolved well throughout but there could have been more going on- try to include a bit more action and make the reader feel more included in the story. I have to say it was truly a wonderful story an I really enjoyed reading it.

Book Title: Love, Teddy Lupin

Tenses: 9/10

Character opinions: 10/10

Planned out: 8/10

Book fits title and description: 10/10

Book title: 5/5

Follows: 5/5

Total: 47/50

Review: The moment I started reading this, I couldn't put it back down. I think the author has done an amazing job conveying Teddy's emotions and it really touched my heart right  from the start. Right now I honestly cannot think of any improvements for this book. The only reason why I've given it 8/10 for planned out is because of the long gaps between chapters which according to the criteria should have the ability to flow  but truthfully I think that it's one of the books strengths and it really shows the impact of the change in Teddy's life. Thanks for the fantastic story!

Book Title: Drarry next gen time travel

Tenses: 7/10

Character opinions: 7/10

Planned out: 7/10

Book fits title and description: 9/10

Book title: 3/5

Follows: 5/5

Total: 38/50

Review: I have read many time travel fanfics but I think this one has many original elements to it. I really enjoyed the interaction between the characters and the dialogue made you feel part of the story. I would like to point out that there were several grammatical and spelling errors throughout the story which could be improved on.  I think that at times, there could have been more description as the whole story was filled with speech. As a reader I would want to know how the setting looks like and what the characters are feeling. I felt that the author could have taken the plot a bit further by really emphasizing the plot twists. Despite this, I found that it was a really mood lifting book.

Judge: blueberrybitch-

book title: the cursed chronicles: year six

tenses: 10/10

character opinions: 8/10

planned out: 7/10

book fits title and description: 9/10

book title: 5/5

follows: 5/5

total: 44/50

review: the cursed chronicles: year six is an engaging and amusing book. The title does go well with the book but there is room for improvement in the description and the cover, even though it all makes sense together. if it wasn't for an occasional error here and there the rating for the planned out could have been higher. Unfortunately, due to some chapters focusing on not so important stuff and some feeling a bit rushed to put out an update, there was a need to mark it as such. While I enjoy reading about Albus, Scorpius and Katrina, whenever Katrina's friends were mentioned I felt I was a tiny bit lost because I felt like I did not know them enough to differentiate them.

book title: i like you - a scorbus story

tenses: 8/10

character opinions: 10/10

planned out: 8/10

book fits title and description: 10/10

book title: 5/5

follows: 5/5

total: 46/50

review:

i like you - a scorbus story was interesting right away in chapter one. scorpius and albus' relationship was cute, which makes the ending sad. about the ending, it felt like it didn't have a clear path and was a spur of the moment decision. planning in advance (at least the ending) wiser decision. though there are a few noticble grammatical errors, with editing it's fine. there is one chapter in particular that i enjoyed the most, chapter ten: . after reading it i was speechless, that is where you can see clearly through scorpius' mind and feelings. that is simply breathtaking. dear author, keep doing what you did there. overall, keep writing!