Name: Oceanmoon. Creative! Although, I'm not sure if Clan cats know what an Ocean is.

Past Names: Ocean. Ah, so she was a kittypet/loner. 

Clan: RiverClan. Alright.

Past Clans: Kittypet. Okay, that confirms what I was thinking. 

Gender: She-cat. Cool!

Sex: Lesbian. Alright, good for her!

Appearance: Oceanmoon is a blue-gray she-cat with a darker stripe on her back that fades into her base coat colour. pink paw-pads. Is very fluffy with silky fur. Has a scar on the back of her head beneath her ear. Feathery tail. What about her eyes? Other than that, she sounds like a very pretty cat. 

Personality: Oceanmoon is cold and somewhat untrusting. She is quiet and doesn't let her anger get the best of her. She is very sarcastic. On good days she is almost kind and funny. Pretty balanced, but could use a few more positive additions. 

Mate: None. Alright.

Kits: None. Maybe she's a bit non-commital? 

Other family/kin: Unknown, she has forgotten her mother's name and her littermates. Okay, that's fair. She could still have some kin listed, even if she's forgotten them though. 

Cause of future death: Landslide. I almost never see Landslides used in causes of death. 

Rank at death: Senior warrior. Alright, that's pretty good. 

Past ranks: Kittypet, apprentice, warrior. So she wasn't a kit when she joined the Clan. Alright!

Good traits: Loyal, calm. Could use more development. 

Bad traits: cold, untrusting, angry. Again, the same thing as above. 

Hunting: 5/10

Fighting: 9/10

Swimming: 4.5/10

Climbing: 2/10

Leadership: 8/10

Reputation: 5/10 (respected somewhat, not gained total trust)

Pretty good.

Likes: Rain, sleeping, being alone, bluejays. Why does she like Bluejays? Are they like a spirit animal or representative/companion to her, or does she just like how they look? Other than that, cool. 

Dislikes: Twolegs, being told what to do, other cats. She was raised a Kittypet, I would assume she would have a bit of affinity with them. And does she dislike all cats? That's a bit much, considering Clan cats gave her a home and let her be a warrior. I would think she'd be at least grateful. 

Scars/injuries: a scar on the back of her head behind her ear and small scattered scars across the rest of her body. Alright! How'd she get them? 

Backstory: Ocean was taken from her mother and siblings at a very young age. The Twolegs she lived with were cruel to her, but they fed her so she stayed with them. After a while, she found an exit and escaped. After that, she roamed the woods for a while, and some loner taught her how to hunt and fight. She eventually stumbled across a RiverClan patrol and joins their clan, where she currently lives. Poor Ocean! Cruel Twolegs are not something I see often. That also explains why she doesn't like Twolegs. This could definitely use a lot more, though. How was her apprenticeship, what was the name of the loner that cared for her, her life as a warrior, up until her death? I get that not every OC needs a large backstory, but they are quite important to the quality and general appeal of the OC. 

Overall, this is a pretty good OC, besides the fact that she could use a more developed backstory and personality. She gets a 7/10. Thank you so much for submitting her!

Bonus: Sort of what I think she looks like! (Just add more of a blueish tinge, and a dark stripe, and yeah.)