Hello there my beautiful wild butterflies!
Ayano here and I wanted to give out a quick update about my upcoming book 'blood detectives', you see for I've been working on it for the past few months and I wanted give out a sneak preview for all of you!

And please what do you think of it? Any error or anything in general that I should be aware of? And please make sure it's constructive criticism butterflies!
But enough rambling please enjoy this sneak preview!

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Taking in a deep breath, I walked up the short stone steps and up to the double black framed glass doors.

Pulling the door handle, I saw/heard how the door broke off its hinges completely. My stomach starts to bubble up in anxiousness; feeling my face and the tip of my ears go a bit more warm than usual; glancing at people whom walked passed me gave out warily(1), sympathetic or weird stares. I gave a nervous laugh mentally panicking as I tried to some how fix it, only for a cop come flying out of the building.

Spreading it's blood red angle like wings wide, flapping themselves every few seconds, as the cop seemed relieved to be out of the building. And not a second later a felt a sudden gust of wind past me and a few feet away stood another cop. Both cops looked at my current predicament and both their lips where simultaneously quivering before hysterically bursting out laughing.

Eventually, their high laughter came too an end with wiped tears and painful stomachs, but before leaving one of them said 'rookie' and both took off. I let out a a quite sigh that I, myself, didn't even know held in. 'Can this day get any worse?' I know I shouldn't jinx it but to be honest, I'm ready for anything.

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Ding!

Sliding off hesitantly on either sides of the metal doors, a gushed of water weaved in, crashing in face-first with the dark blue wall, knocking out small pots of plants in the process. The floor becoming splashes of different sizes of puddles, making it slippery and difficult walk. And the once beautifully diverse landscapes we're now soaked and ruined.

After the mini-tsunami, both officers step out of the elevator. Soaked to the bone from head to toe. The only thing the covered them was were a pair of goggles and a snorkel.

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I'm really sorry if it's very little information, but I don't want to give out too much. But like I said I hope you enjoyed it as much as I have. Until next my! 💕

Bye-bye my little wild butterflies~