Am I?
I see through my eyes,
people carry more than a single face
Am I seeing right?
I listen through my ears,
people talking things they don't even mean
Am I listening right?
I feel through my skin,
people touching me even after being conscious of my discomfort
Am I feeling right?
I smell through my nose,
something burning even when there's no trace of fire
Am I smelling right?
I taste with my tongue,
taste of words, bitter, sweet, tangy, sour; even when they are tasteless
Am I tasting right?
Are my senses working right?
Am I functioning right?
If yes,
Then why do I feel like this in spite
Is it just me?
Or is it the world who is not right?
-lazy_weirdo
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Heyyyyyyyy Readers
So through this poem, I've tried to highlight few human made evils like faking feelings and expression, lies, physical harassment, jealousy and use of langue to hurt others...... So far we have let the SUPERIOR HUMAN INTELLECT to rule our senses.. we search for a hidden motive and meaning behind everything....... Our instincts, our natural responses, Its long forgotten ......... we are in a world where being true is vulnerable which is a pity...... it is kinda abstract but it made sense to me so I am not sure whether it made sense to you all or not so let me know that...... also let me know if there is a chance for improvement in this poem!
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Love yaa
-lazy_weirdo
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