For @ALiVe_AnD_wElL. Next oc will be Cloudysky.

"Hiya! My name's Pinekit but you can call me Piney 'cause mommy and daddy do"

Aww! I like you filled out the form this way. I love Pine- as a prefix, and it isn't seen too often. I'd like to know what Piney's warrior name will be.

"I'm a girl silly hehe"

Ok lil cat

"I'm three moons! Soon I'll be six and I'll be an apprentice"

Aw baby :(

"Hmmm my fur is all dark brown like my grandpa and I'm a tabby like daddy! Mommy says I have her big green eyes"

Nice. Dark brown tabbies are overused tho, I would suggest some white or paler brown somewhere. Green eyes are also overused, but I think you used them to go with her name, Pine. That's fine.. I guess.

"I live in The Swamp Colony but we are also called Swampclan. We are like the other clan's but we have our own special ways! We are the bestest clan in the whole wide world!"

Ahh I like SwampClan. That is a very cool name, and I love it when people give their Clans their own set of rules.

"I'm a kit right now but one day I'll be a warrior like mommy and daddy and grandpa before he became an elder"

Nice. I'd still like to know the warrior name..

"Hmm I like to watch the big tough warriors bring back fresh kill and talk about their battles! They call me ms.mouse because I'm so polite and quiet when they are talking. Daddy says I should talk more but I'm happy just looking around. I know a whole bunch of things! I'm super smart but sometimes my brothers call me a know it all which totally isn't true! I'm just trying to look out for the silly mouse brains is all. I like to be with mommy when daddy is out doing his warrior business but my silly billy brother's like to try and sneak out. I'll only disobey mommy when they get themselves in big trouble and I have to go find them ... Daddy says to "always tell mommy or a warrior when something is wrong" but I forget that sometimes oopsie. I try my very best to be a good sister and a good kit for mommy and daddy"

Ahh how can I criticize this cuteness :( this is good. Perfect. I love it!

·~*OVERALL*~·
8/10. I'd like to know about Piney as a warrior, apprentice, elder, etc. Her pelt color is kinda dull. Other than that... this is great, and adorable!