So you guys are probably really impatient and want some updates (which idk how you survived this long then) but anywaysssssss, I'm going to be giving this story a MAKEOVERRRRR!
Don't get me wrong, I love how it is right now, and I'm keeping most of the crucial plot points/dialogue, but I kinda want to fix some typos, add more details, and patch some plot holes. So you may not be getting a new part (I will still try to work on it, but not as much as the makeover), but you will get to re read the first parts, and they will be 1000000x better.
Also, I may or may not be working with Silentstory132 to make all the character reference sheets, and may or may not be starting an animation (which I still need to discuss with you, SilentStory in pm so hit me up when you get the chance).

So just TRY to hold your ponies and stick with me for a better, more revised story, fixed plot holes, and interesting plot ahead- hopefully in the near future.