It started out as a cold winter day. I don't know how long I've been out here. Ever since I found out I was a multi-breed my pack kicked me out not only that I was a submissive. Fucking packs don't like multi-breed freaks I guess. I was walking to god knows where when vampires started to surround me. I wanted to run but I didn't know if I was fast enough. A chick with blonde hair said "I think the queen will like this one. I hope she does because I'm tired of trying to find a submissive for my sister. Ugh." She walked closer to me and I flinched. I thought she was gonna hit me and then the boys around her started laughing and moving closer like I was a piece of meat. I cowered into the girl then flinched when she touched my back. I hope the blood ain't showing. The mystery girl said "Hey little one calm down we aren't gonna hurt you. Well unless you run." I shook my head no. I pointed towards my voice box is then tried saying I can't talk. When I was born something was wrong with my vocal cords. She said "Let's go we can get you help and then you'll serve our queen." She went to pick me up but I flinched. She gently picked me up and ran to some castle. My mouth dropped and the girl laughed at me so I pouted. She took me where the queen was and the girl said to the queen "My fair lady we have bought you a new submissive" I got into the submissive stance knowing if I didn't I'd get beat again. The queen said "That was fast. This one looks so willing to do what she needs too. Rise sub" I stood up but still had my head down. I didn't want to get beat. There was a loud sound and I jumped to behind the big chair scared that I was going to get beat again and then I saw the queen starring at me so I bowed my head. The queen said "Come here little one" I crawled to her like they always said submissive crawl not walk and they do not eat but you cook for everyone you only get scrapes The queen said "What's your name little one?" I didn't look at her but I signed 'L' 'O' 'S' 'T' The queen said "Can you talk?" I shook my head no and the girl from before said "Her vocal cords are shit. We can fix them tho." The queen said "Get them fixed and then put her in my room." I thought of the time they said 'If you go in the masters bedroom do not go on the bed you stay in the corner and you also get beat in there I was shaking in fear. When we got to the medical side of the castle the girl said "Lost needs her vocal cords fixed." The doctor nodded and told me to lay on the bed. The doctor said "I am gong to put you under okay?" I nodded and he put me under. I was asleep for what felt like hours. When I woke up the doctor said "can you talk?" I said "Hello"

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