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One day at [Something] Beach I was walking and Saw a Pure gold shell. "woa." I whispered."I'm not Sellin' that on Ebay!" (why eBay??) I Picked it up and took it home. Then I showed it to my friends at school.

The Comments were "IS that real gold?", "WoW!" (Lol World of Warcraft), "Who cares, its just a Shell." & "Cooleo!" (OMG CRINGE) when I got home I heard an alarm from the Shell, and soon it turned into a robot! It followed me. It was Small, So I Slipped it into my back Pocket. "weeeee!" It Said aS I walked outSide and down the stePS. (When I made this, I was thinking of Gir from Invader Zim)

I ran down the Street to my friends Nathan's houie to Show him my robot.

(All the capitals physically hurt...)